Winter's Twelfth Night

Hello mhmmcolleenx0! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or preferably just Winter)! Everyone else has explained all of the important parts of this site. To elaborate on Kite's explanation of the ...

Hello Renesmee! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (preferably Winter)! Welcome to YWS! I think everyone else covered the rules and questions and everything else. You said that you like role-playing? ...

Hmmm... Interesting. I understand how you wanted to make the piece sound like the thoughts of a child. That's a nice idea, actually, once you understand it. But do want ...

Hello Kylan! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter) and I shall review your story today! Well, I must say that this was intense! Is this based on a ...

Hello JustDance! I like the idea of doing a story in an animal's POV. I've never done something like that before, but I think it would be interesting if you ...

Oh I know! I'm going to add that part. hahaha I totally agree about Dakota, she does look eight! Maybe more like 10... But still, the volturi? Aren't they supposed ...

Thanks for reviewing everyone! Samuel Garrison, I think you may be a bit confused. Or perhaps it is I who is confused. You say that Emma is keen on staying ...

Hello Ballerina13. I really enjoyed reading this! I am a dancer myself and it helped that I could relate to the story. I think that the other reviewers caught most ...

Hello BeckFletch! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter) and I shall review your story today! First of all, excellent job! There were very few mistakes in grammar and ...

Interesting. I didn't see any mistakes in grammar and punctuation. You could definitely use some description here. The lack of it makes this almost boring. Almost. Also, it took me ...

Just letting you know that I added more to my review if you want to check it out. Wisemann did a good job of explaining. :D

*Edited Jan. 24 4:23pm* Hello Rascalover! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter) and I shall review your story for you today! Overall I thought this story was quite ...

Hello Kakali! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter) and I will be your reviewer today! This was an excellent piece. Well done! It was very interesting and held ...

Thanks for reviewing/commenting to everyone who liked it/didn't like it! And thanks for the gold stars! I love writing these, they're such a great way to waste time. I have ...

Thanks! I'm glad you both liked it! I'm planning on writing an Eclipse and Twilight parody as well. I'm writing these out of order, obviously. I'm still working on this ...